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And this,
      I believe,
   Begs the question

But it's a tad too sweet
      For my delicate palate
But yet,
   I seem to be craving it
And my tounge yearns
     for just another taste

It's not
   that I enjoy it,
       Persay,
Nor even want it,
   I suppose,
I think it's that
      I find myself
   Needing it
  In a very unplesant way

I feel all hollow
   And empty inside
When I remember
      Whats no longer there
And it's tangible
   It almost hurts
When I find myself deprived


Would you please,
   If you don't mind
Put me out of my suffering,
      And let me wet
   My lips
With just enough
     To get me by?

I just need one more taste
     Of you.
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Either that, or some chapstick, please.

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~nekokawai Jul 11, 2008, 9:58:26 PM
love is the best dessert.

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~perfect-alibi Jul 12, 2008, 4:47:33 AM
Oh yeah. With a side of whipped cream and dusted with powderd sugar. mm-mmgood. ^-^

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And I would totally be a shakespeare groupie,
if, you know,
he wasn't all dead and stuff.
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~nekokawai Jul 12, 2008, 10:16:37 AM
Oh don't tempt me nom nom nim

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FAQ #56: How can I get more pageviews?


"Everyone is different, no two people are not on fire."

"Cigarettes are like candy, only on fire."
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~Psychosis-Syndrome Jul 28, 2008, 7:57:17 PM
This had a very old feel to it, I liked it. =]

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And hold on, hold tight, open daylight, we will overcome /

Open your eyes, over the new sight, fly the Flags of Dawn - Flags of Dawn by Thrice
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~perfect-alibi Jul 29, 2008, 6:57:33 PM
Why, thank you dear. That makes me all warm and fuzzy on the inside. MUAH

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And I would totally be a shakespeare groupie,
if, you know,
he wasn't all dead and stuff.
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~Psychosis-Syndrome Jul 30, 2008, 4:33:20 PM
Warm and fuzzy as a teddybear? =o Probably not, but you're welcome<3

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And hold on, hold tight, open daylight, we will overcome /

Open your eyes, over the new sight, fly the Flags of Dawn - Flags of Dawn by Thrice
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